How I Got a First Class in Every Essay at University Using This Paragraph Structure + Examples

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Dr. Amina you are so good at what you do. I binged on your videos last academic year. I used to be stuck in the 2:1s whenever I wrote an essay but after watching a lot of your videos I got 1sts in all the modules in my second semester and ended up graduating with a first class. I am so grateful for you xx.

I teach academic literacy at a university in South Africa 🇿🇦 and this video was the perfect example of what I want to teach my students about writing a strong paragraph. Thank you so much for your videos!🙏🏾

Your videos are so useful! My first assignment (research proposal) was a fail. I realised a d recently been diagnosed with ADHD. since then, after the support from uni but most of all from your videos I had 3x B's from other assignments. Still room for improvement. But with your help I'm not as scared for my dissertation anymore

now commenting on this video over half a year since I first watched it to say thank you so so much Dr Amina. I just finished my intercalated degree as part of medical school, and ever since I started following your structure, every essay I wrote at medical school (bar one of them where I didn't really understand the question) I scored over 70. I just finished my finals now and don't know what grade I got yet, but I am very confident that thanks to your teaching I managed to improve my writing and researching skills. I really appreciate it. I feel like this kind of information should have been taught to us from first year! But now as a third year I am very grateful to have come across it. Thank you again!😊

Thank you thank you for your videos!!! I'm a second-year psych student from Australia and I struggle with writing. Thank you for explaining this! Btw I watched a few of your videos last year for my lab report and got my first-ever distinction!

I can't thank you enough for this video. I qualified as a nurse 10yrs ago. I'm now doing level 6 asthma course. Iv done my 1st essay and after watching this I think I may av 2 make a few changes

Thanks for posting. I will be implementing this technique in my upcoming dissertation. I will let you know how I get on when my results are in. And I'm looking forward to checking out your future videos.

Very insightful, you simplified it so well, i might just have found a new hobby, writing essays! God bless you

Thank you, wonderfully put💜✌️😊👍 I love the way you describe sentences etc as beautiful your passion and joy is inspiring. My best paper at post grad level, has, thus far in my life, been equivalent to a B+. How did I achieve that? No clue. Do I know the subject? Yes, it was also my job too. No one at college or university - especially with my dyspraxia and lower spectrum dyslexia - ever sat me down and showed me how to write a paper. Same at work. I'm now considering academic endeavours again, your video makes perfect sense, thank you - although I've yet to figure out what universities want in terms of the whole format and their phraseology has changed a little too. Thanks again ✌️😊👍💜

Very helpful thanks Amina. Could you please make a video on how to do the Analysis part in more details 🙏

Thank you dr amina, I've just began my msc psychology (after almost 10 years away from academia) course and your videos are super helpful. Would love a video on how best to read papers effectively.

your advice is gold. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. Very much appreciated.

My goodness! Thank you so much.. I was struggling with my literature review but you've just explained it all too well making it so much easy for me.❤❤

This has been incredibly helpful! Thank you for the tips!

This is a very understandable and helpful video! Thank you!

As ever, thank you.

Thank you. Yes i will like to know how to pick points from a paper. Please share

Hi Dr Amina, Thank you so much for making these videos. They have been extremely helpful😊. I would love if you could make the video on choosing information from a research paper as evidence, like you mentioned at the end of this video. 🙏

Thanks so much for sharing this I’ve been waiting for this for ages 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾