Betrayed Villain Deku X Toga||Class 1a ignores Deku||First Story||Mha texting stories||
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Published 2021-09-24
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Mha texting stories
Danmachi
Bell carnell
Tessia
Izuku midoriya
Deku
Danmachi
Arthur Leywin
Hestia
My hero academia
Deku
Deku texting story
Elemental Deku
Danmachi Deku
Mha X danmachi
All Comments (17)
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Advice for future stories: That time skip at the end was not a good idea in my opinion due to how sudden it was I mean we didnt get to see anything related to how toga and deku got together and we did not see why they thought he was the traitor due to it not being explained. I understand in the interest of time and storage but it was getting good before that.
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Wow not bad on the story Better any other Iโve ever seen Keep it up ๐๐๐ป
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Dam my boii gaining subs ๐
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i liked it
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AHHHH BRO JUST STOP I KEEP FOGOT I LOVE THIS BUT I KEEP ASK THAT GIRL TO STOP!!!!!
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Not bad for your first ever text story Betrayed, ignored, villain, and x toga I love it already, all my favourite all come together and is release today What good can come next Anyway Keep up the great/ amazing work ๐๐๐๐ป๐๐ปโ๐ปโ๐ปโ๐ปโ๐ป๐
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Boiii ayoo first vid
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Ani-chan: izuju Lil rosy: stop making spelling mistaks My POV: EYOOOOOO
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Yooo I love it it may be your first and I gotta say you killed it its amazing I'm looking forward to the future ๐ keep up the great work ๐๐โ
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Next time donโt add conversations that arenโt apart of the story other than that good story
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The only thing I hate and not just from you is the narrative and creator dialog it breaks the immersion.
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the idea could of been good but to me all the times you keep arguing with the narrator just makes it all weird and the story isn't easy to follow with it
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To many breaks out of character story
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Nice one ๐ฅ๐ฅ
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Im confused??? I thought it was a story about 1A ignoring Deku but why did it turn to betrayal something, if that was a skip then please look into it. But the first part was actually good though the ending is kinda disappointing.
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i think that every thing up until the point where you forgot kirishima was good. in my opinion if you feel like it, you should recreate this if you want.
