Betrayed Villain Deku X Toga||Class 1a ignores Deku||First Story||Mha texting stories||
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Published 2021-09-24
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Mha texting stories
Danmachi
Bell carnell
Tessia
Izuku midoriya
Deku
Danmachi
Arthur Leywin
Hestia
My hero academia
Deku
Deku texting story
Elemental Deku
Danmachi Deku
Mha X danmachi
All Comments (17)
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Advice for future stories: That time skip at the end was not a good idea in my opinion due to how sudden it was I mean we didnt get to see anything related to how toga and deku got together and we did not see why they thought he was the traitor due to it not being explained. I understand in the interest of time and storage but it was getting good before that.
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Wow not bad on the story Better any other I’ve ever seen Keep it up 😉👍🏻
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Dam my boii gaining subs 😄
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i liked it
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Not bad for your first ever text story Betrayed, ignored, villain, and x toga I love it already, all my favourite all come together and is release today What good can come next Anyway Keep up the great/ amazing work 😄😉👍🏻👍🏻✊🏻✊🏻✌🏻✌🏻😄
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Ani-chan: izuju Lil rosy: stop making spelling mistaks My POV: EYOOOOOO
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AHHHH BRO JUST STOP I KEEP FOGOT I LOVE THIS BUT I KEEP ASK THAT GIRL TO STOP!!!!!
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Yooo I love it it may be your first and I gotta say you killed it its amazing I'm looking forward to the future 😁 keep up the great work 😁👍❗
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Boiii ayoo first vid
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the idea could of been good but to me all the times you keep arguing with the narrator just makes it all weird and the story isn't easy to follow with it
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Nice one 🔥🔥
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To many breaks out of character story
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The only thing I hate and not just from you is the narrative and creator dialog it breaks the immersion.
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Next time don’t add conversations that aren’t apart of the story other than that good story
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i think that every thing up until the point where you forgot kirishima was good. in my opinion if you feel like it, you should recreate this if you want.
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Im confused??? I thought it was a story about 1A ignoring Deku but why did it turn to betrayal something, if that was a skip then please look into it. But the first part was actually good though the ending is kinda disappointing.
