"On The Bus" Creepypasta

Published 2024-06-14
Creepypasta author ► Lucas Llinás Múnera

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All Comments (17)
  • OOO SNAP! Did I get insulted about being a 50 year old woman in the first 2 minutes? I'm not a young woman so the bus is the least of my worries? 🥺🤓
  • Excellent story! The monotony of that one sentence about sitting in your seat facing the front of the bus really makes it scary. Nice job.
  • OOOO SNAP!!! I was going to go onto Patreon to compliment you but decided to let everyone know that this is my favorite story you have narrated. Well, not my favorite but the one that have filled me with existential fear for my future. I have always been a woman of ACTION, (and a capability of a bit of violence). In old age to have that ability for action taken away caused my stomach to feel hot. Then to lose the DESIRE for action caused my chest to tighten. I have never considered the future where I couldn't leap into action . I have spent 31 years as an ER nurse, immediate action is in my blood. But losing the desire for action?!?!? I don't want to think of it. THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR THE EXISTENTIAL DREAD AT 8:21 AM.!! THINK I WILL JUST STAY IN BED TODAY!?!?
  • @Sn4pp3r
    This was an interesting little story, I liked the 2nd person narration of it too. Very enjoyable indeed.
  • Well, this was quite a nice surprise to stumble upon. You made me grateful I don't have to use public transportation any longer. Very unsettling tone and yet almost soothing at the same time while telling a story of terror that slowly erases who the main character is while aging them to death. Unique and unnerving. I liked it.
  • @ajlaguna7880
    I love your reading, my one comment is just your voice is so balanced i didn't realized a vid ended and a new one auto played , i was like wth is MC doing and I was like oh its a different story 😂
  • @Ironman251
    Awesome stories as always, they help me fall asleep at night 😊
  • This is a rather unsettling story, and your pitch is excellent for it. Thank you x
  • @hugger5374
    Great story I love it! I'm so excited for your book!! Ahhhh the wait is gonna kill me 😂
  • The minute I heard “the phantom bus” I instantly thought of The Hash-Slinging Slasher.
  • The first nightmare I can remember was of me being scared in the back of a school bus with nowhere to run. Someone is moving slowly from the front of the bus with a knife to do me in. I was 6 years old and this was my introduction to nightmares.
  • First view first like forst comment! Great video pretty sure this is the first time youve popped up on my yt feed *i was wrong im already subscribed haha just havent seen ur vids pop up in a while, but im glad you did tonight! I love when horror channels especially those with relaxing voices that help me fall asleep pop up on my feed at the perfect time😊😊thanks for a great vid and goodnight 😴 💤