Open Mic at Firecreek Coffee on 29 Sep 2014

Zengineer
Zengineer
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Published 2014-12-01
My mediocre open mic set at Firecreek Coffee on 29 Sep 2014. While I am pleased with my writing, my delivery oscillated between good and abysmal. I stumbled over my words from time to time which means I need to rehearse more and take my time on stage. Also, I do not need to fight the audience. "Yes, and" their reactions to keep them entertained, garner more laughs, and keep them on my side. It is a friendly open mic, not the Apollo or Palace.

*I had a weak beginning
*I need to make the Netflix jokes more succinct.
*I delivered my last joke differently than planned and it was much weaker.

Bits: Honorary MCAT, Foreshadow box, Netflix random, Wedding already, Wedding underdog, 2000 not yet, Ice cream and gin, Atticus dad, Womb for improvement, Up documentary, Highway adoption, Baby sitter for me, Ohh rugby!
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